Only one reader had an issue with the investment size. He managed to find an investment history of the period that indicated my $5 million for 5% valuation was too high. All during the writing, and going back to my MBA finance days, I had been worried I was too low! We’ll do a quick renegotiation later. Very interesting, though!
Remember how a couple of chapters ago I mentioned the Buckmans were taking a vacation in Hawaii and visiting their friends at Schofield Barracks. Well, I’ve said it before, but it remains amazing to me. I can’t believe who all reads these stories! I got an email saying the reader had worked at Schofield Barracks and still lived in Hawaii. Did I want a fact checker?
Wow! Definitely! So, I bundled up a couple of chapters and emailed them for a quick edit. It’s a good thing, too, since Chapter 74 needed a complete and utter rewrite! We went back and forth through a couple of edits. Infinite thanks to Slider for his info and edits.